Well I'm not sure this looks much different to the previous update but I've worked more on her jumper which in the ref photo is bright white .. but I quite like the effect of the paper showing through. I've added freckles and more skintones and adjusted the colours in her hair. In the ref photo her fringe (bangs) really are much redder than the rest of her hair so I've tried to compromise a bit. I have one other ref photo taken when she was a few years younger and her hair is more blonde than red. Again, much will depend on the client's wishes.
I had intended to call it a day here and email my client for approval/critique .... but David just looked at the picture on screen and said it looks as though she has white claw marks down her cheek! So I'll be making some adjustments tomorrow when the light is better - smoothing out those lines although I think the camera has picked up on the highlights and exaggerated them - I'm sure they aren't that pronounced in real life.